mchoof's art Reviews on Newgrounds

4 Art Reviews

2015-01-25 14:12:39

I think you might just have won the monthly challange.
Super nice idea, really great painting style, I just love this piece!
You really did a fantastic job with everything! :D

Xavy-027 responds:

Thanks so much for such encouragement! Regardless of the competition, I love Hit-Girl and I enjoyed painting it.

wonder woman superselfie

2015-01-22 13:08:01

The Idea is fine, but there is a lot of things you can do better abouut this drawing.
First, figure out your proportions.

Second, pick a better skintone for wonder woman, it seemed more like snow white to me.

Third, a plain white background can be distracting and it would be nicer if you had something else to make the character pop. With that skintone it kinda makes her become to background to be honest.

Fourth, you don´t have to be all chickenscratchy with the hair, a more soft brush would work better.

Fifth, don´t get sloppe with the linework, a little thickness would be nice, and try not to get chickenscratchy. It helps zooming out.

Sixth, dont get sloppy with your description either... I guess that is just me though :P

Anyways keep practising, keep drawing and you improve on these mistakes and make better and cooler drawings and paintings in the future. I know you can do it. :D

LittleNerdyGem responds:

Thank 4 your advice, I am stuck artistly as my style and skill level haven't change or developed in years for some reason.
I tried tradisional to digital, photoshop to sketchbook , laptop to andriod tablet.
This was do on sketchbook on my samung galaxy 10.1 note tablet .
In all fairness I enter into this competition to drive me to be better I really want these prizes because I know they can make me better.
But it seems that you have to be crazy good to get the prize worth winning which always make my feel I will never be good enough.

Vader Redesign